Book Comments

The New Birth
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Brandon Tuttle 28 Apr, 2019
Yeah, I'm working on adding more detail to the new chapters I am working on. Thanks for the comment :)
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OnManicLine Owner 26 Apr, 2019
I think your work is great ! A few tips and pointers would be to focus a little bit more on the details in the background and connect the story between chapters a little better. Also loved the one part where you showed the reflection of the visors in the full power scene :)